英语六级作文真题讲解

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  以下是小编分享的英语六级作文真题讲解,一起来看看吧。

  2007 年12月真题

  Directions : For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Digital Age. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese :

  1.如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的应用

  2.例如数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习和生活的影响

  Digital Age

  With the development of economy,digital products such as computers, cameras, MP3s, and mobile phones have wound their way into most people’s daily life. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV, a high proportion (93.5 percent) of people in China have once got in touch with certain kind of digital products.

  Digital products greatly facilitate our life. With the help of con^uters, we may even deal with our work at home,enjoying music at the same time. With digital cameras, we may take photos to our hearts9 content, keeping happy occasions as a permanent memory. With digital TV programs, it is convenient for us to watch programs at any time we like.

  However, digital products also bring about negative effect. Some people are getting too dependent on digital products and almost becoming slaves of it, being unable to calm down to study or work without wearing their MP4s and mobile phones at hand. (156 词)

  “一句话”点评

  很显然,第一段的数据和CCTV抓住了阅卷老师的眼球。同时 使用了 conduct, a high proportion of 和 get in touch with 等好词和短 语,无疑为文章增加了亮点。

  快捷构思

  第一段:描述现象,弓I人该段中心“如今数字化产品得到越来越 广泛的应用”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示。

  第二段:开门见山展现段落中心“数字化产品的使用对人们丁 作、学习和生活的影响”,并举电脑、数码相机和数码 电视的例子来支持该中心

  第三段:直接提出数字化产品的不良影响,并展现逐层递进的 结果来支持。

  美丽词句

  1.wind one’s way into 闯入,进人

  2.facilitate使便利,使变得容易(亮点词,相当于短语make easy)

  3.With the help of computers,we may even deal with our work at home, enjoying music at the same time. With digital cameras, we may take photos to our hearts,content,keeping happy occasions as a permanent memory. With digital TV programs, it is convenient for us to watch whatever programs at any time we like.(并列关系的三个排比句子准确地表达了数字化产品对 人们生活和工作的影响。deal with处理;to one’s hearts’ content 让人满意的;keep happy occasions存留快乐的时刻。)

  4.bring about 产生,导致

  5.calm down保持镇静