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【例文】
The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly.
The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008.
Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
【译文】
在我们康明城市家庭平均收入从8000元，每年1998至2008年的20,000元。在此期间，平均家庭支出结构也发生了变化。这些图形显示了明显的变化。
而一般家庭开支的最大部分是住房。 1998年，平均每个家庭花费了其对房屋的收入百分之25。在2880，关于住房支出上升到百分之42。食品和饮料是平均家庭开支第二大的一部分。 1998年，大约18%的平均收入是用于这一项目。 2008年，这一数字增长到30%。由于在费用等增加住房和食物，结果在其他项目的费用已经减少到1998年的57%，至2008年的28%。
因此，可以得出一个结论，随着收入的增加，人们可以改善他们的生活步骤。但仍是一般家庭要花费很大一部分收入，以满足基本需要。
【例文】
Recently, we have made a survey of the people on physical training. Only 35 percent of the people surveyed have taken part in physical activities.
Over half of the people say they haven’t got enough time to take exercises. 34.9 percent of them complain they don’t have places where they can relax themselves and that there are not enough training facilities, while another 12.9 percent of the people feel that they live too far away from the training centers. Some of them even don’t know how to train.
For lack of physical training, many people are not in good health. People should realize the importance of it, and measures should be taken to provide people with training facilities.
【译文】
最近，我们提出了对体育锻炼的人的调查。只有35的受访民众曾经参与体育活动的一部分。
超过半数的人说，他们已经没有足够的时间采取演习。其中百分之34.9抱怨他们没有地方可以放松自己，并没有足够的训练设施，而另一百分之12.9的人认为他们生活太远的训练中心。他们中有些人甚至不知道如何培养。
对于缺乏体育锻炼，许多人并不健康状况良好。人们应该意识到它的重要性，并应采取措施，以提供训练设施的人。